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Reviews For: Fall From Grace

a beginner
2008-05-06
ch 8,
abusethe summary is really good and so is the chapter... but the updates are really slow, do something abt it...

honestly speaking, just update it and complete it, dont hang on us, and if u do it, its ok to be late in updates... not that much though... it creeps me out to wait and wait...

tata
A Minion Named Onion
2008-05-05
ch 8,
abuseGreat. I really like the way this is turning out, and I wish there weren't only three reviews--it's a good story! Keep working on it--do you like how it's going?
A Minion Named Onion
2008-02-27
ch 6,
abuseHey, guess what! You have another faithful reader! I'll come back if you'll keep updating!

I really liked it--it's not too cliched and it's not hard to follow and it's funny.
One concern that I have is that it's going a little fast, but maybe that's just my taste. I'm sure you know what's going to happen.
a beginner
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abusednt make it once a month plz...
a beginner
2008-02-26
ch 6,
abusewhen r gonna put the next ch...

ur good...

cheers
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