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| brooke 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, i like it so far. promising :D brooke |
| Forfeit The Game 2008-01-06 ch 1,  | abuseLike the beginning. Not much in the way of plot to comment on yet, its only the intro. Good job of introducing the character, defining her basic persona. Like the originality so far. Write more. |