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| diffident 2008-01-06 ch 1,  | abuseI like this poem; it's a bit clever, and not too serious I don't think. I'm just confused on the ending. It's never going back to where it came, but the owner is going to send you on your way home? Anyway, I liked the poem regardless. I love the lines "the speed got higher/engine hot like fire". marie |
| cherry144 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI think I got the second meaning. Very...intriguing. Reminds me of a poem by some weird dude that wrote a very dirty car poem. |