Definitely disturbing, which means it's a strong piece to effectively evoke emotion. Very creative. The last three lines are so sad...

This is different, but well written _

Good, mildly disturbing, but good. you are a great writer...

Scary, creepy, horrific...I love it.

I find that all of your work reminds me of books I've read.

Which is a good thing because I only read good books.

Great poem. It's very relateable. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day.

Twilight Starr

Disturbing, but I loved it! great job! now you just have to post your fic, and I'll be the happiest girl on earth! )