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rust phoenix 2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Definitely disturbing, which means it's a strong piece to effectively evoke emotion. Very creative. The last three lines are so sad...
flies.like.decay. 2008-01-09 . chapter 1
This is different, but well written ^_^
Lady Riss 2008-01-07 . chapter 1
Good, mildly disturbing, but good. you are a great writer...
uskohakuchan 2008-01-06 . chapter 1
Scary, creepy, horrific...I love it.

I find that all of your work reminds me of books I've read.

Which is a good thing because I only read good books.

^^
Twilight Starr 2008-01-06 . chapter 1
Great poem. It's very relateable. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~
NitroGlycerine 2008-01-06 . chapter 1
Disturbing, but I loved it!! great job! now you just have to post your fic, and I'll be the happiest girl on earth! =)
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