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| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2008-01-07 ch 1,  | abusein the last stanza I would say: I thought the tree was dead... but it's up to you. I wish the first stanza had more power, but effect of how you formatted it makes the reader kind of drift between the lines - which works :) good write |