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| diffident 2008-01-06 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem has the rare blend of flow, rhyme, and meaning. It's so difficult to maintain all three, but you did this and it seems almost effortless. My only tic is with the last line. It feels like the flow just abruptly stops there. But other than that, this poem was fantastic. marie |