It made me giggle and cringe at the same time.

Still not sure if that's a good or a bad thing, but either way you at least made me feel something. I enjoyed it; as did Frank, apparently.

- Lulu

That was kinda gross... But beautifully written. I never knew such a combination was possible.

Wow, I really like this. Especially the greed theme, it's so underrated. I like your use of words and phrases, and all together it's a very enjoyable read. I particularly enjoyed your descriptions, they appealed to all the sentences. I don't really have any suggestions as to improvement, it's really well written. Great job indeed.