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Reviews For: Myth of Blood
D.J.P. 2008-01-07 . chapter 1
This is terrible, are you planning to break up with a boyfriend or a lover some time soon. It reminds me of the other poem I commented on. I believe, perhaps that this is the other side of those feelings. It's unfortunate for the person in this, but as he should realize, love may not be true, and may be found in many places... from many people.
Random-Idiocity 2008-01-06 . chapter 1
''Knowing a rage comes between half-lies whispered.'' good line. Great poem. Keep it Up!
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