 Miyasha 2009-11-15 . chapter 33I've been waiting for Alec to kick some butt so yay! And it would seem that Seito has jumped on the bandwagon. I'm glad she's come around to liking Alec like the rest of the girls in this story. Harem is great! By the way, the beginning of this story, the very first line. I was very intested in knowing what that meant. But I guess I'll have to wait until future chapters. *sigh* I get so excited when this story gets updated. And although waiting is hard I'll wait for the next chapter and chapters soon to come. I hope this story gets updated til the end. So keep doing what you do. You totally deserve more reviews for this story. I mean it really feels like I'm watching an anime...in literal form...Haha... |
 Miyasha 2009-11-02 . chapter 32Oh, Hikaru made an appearance and so did Yuki and Yami. Cool. And I luv how Alec keeps teasing Mai. It's soo cute and funny. It would be soo cool if they went on a date or something but then again it doesn't really seem likely since Alec seems to like Celeste and Celeste seems to like Alec. They're just too dense to realize it or too scared to face the bananas, walk the plank, play the game...Ok that's enough metaphors for one review. Anywho I just really like the interaction between Mai and Alec. It keeps things spicy, rich in flavor, sugary uh ok I really need to stop with the metaphors...if these even count as metaphors... anyways I've said too much once again. Haha, but yeah...Just keep going higher and higher and yes. I got that quote from ddr. I use it alot cuz it's better than saying keep up the good work or never give up. It just sounds cooler and it shall become a trend to say it.Haha... |
 Miyasha 2009-10-22 . chapter 31Yay! You updated faster than I thought you would. But I'm not complaining. I love the interaction between Alec and Kuroi. I know it's not much but I love it anyway. I don't know why but I do. Maybe it's cuz Kuroi is jealous of Alec and Alec's all like, 'whatever' and just wants to be alone. The interaction between Alec and Suzu is also pretty neat. I'm glad she made an appearance...But I kinda hope the wizard makes an appearance too. He's been out of the story for awhile. But it's all good. And a halloween episode?! I can't believe I didn't see that coming. I should of known that Halloween would of been like their favorite holiday. *sigh* This story is just too cool. Looking forward to the next chapter. Even if it's after halloween...Wowza, I just don't know when to stop typing. Oh well, I can't help it. |
 Miyasha 2009-10-19 . chapter 30I luv the relationship between all of the characters soo much...or maybe I should say I love the relationship between all the female characters and Alec,including the plant and dragon. I know the dragon is genderless but still...Anyways I always read this story like right away when it's updated and I'm on my computer but I don't review right away. But even so I still read it. *sigh* This review is getting kinda long but I can't help it. It's a great story and I wanna read it to the end so keep up the good work. This is probably like the only story I read on this site...I mean, I'll probably try to check out some other stories eventually but for now this story has my attention...actually it's had my attention for awhile...Ok I'm gonna shut up now. I don't wanna sound like a silly annoying fangirl or something but then again maybe it's too late hahaha... |
 Miyasha 2009-08-16 . chapter 29I can't beleive I didn't review this chapter. Each time I see that the story has been updated I start reading it right away but I forget to review which sucks cuz then you have no way of telling who does and does not like the story right? Anyway this chapter was pretty interesting but it was focused on Sylvia. I would have never thought that a chapter focused on Sylvia would have been soo interesting. It was a good read. I loved that whole the body had a mind of it's own thing. That was soo cool. I mean Celeste was always cool but now I think Sylvia can enter the rankings of coolness. But I still like all the other characters. I mean you keep adding characters but that's cool cuz the characters are cool and they don't all act the same. Which reminds me of something from a previous chapter. Alec's father touched Celeste's wings, that soo funny. |
 Latios151 2009-07-15 . chapter 27Triple review!
Chapter 25:
Interesting to say the least. So that's Sarah, uh? Definitely a Succubus through and through. It's also nice to see that Celeste's "faults in bloodstream control" are increasing in frequency. XD
She got really angry when her "it's not a date" got interrupted, didn't she? And she is finally beginning to realise something's "wrong" with her... Alec may be dense when it comes to feelings, but Celeste is definitely a close second.
But that's one of the reasons we all like her, isn't it? :D
Chapter 26 & 27:
WOW. Just, wow. I'm having difficulty finding words awesome enough to review these two chapters. I have to admit that some points with three or more people talking at the same time were a bit confusing, and I had to re-read them, but, all in all, you did a very good job. |
 kaore 2009-07-11 . chapter 28I'm confused. I'll have to go back and reread some things. |
 King0Mik 2009-07-09 . chapter 28Ah, I love the suspense! Angels are shown in quite a different light, ne? Almost like they're the 'bad guys...' And whatever of this strange favour Luna requests? Interesting...
Anyhoo, as for Note 4, it's missing because I ate it. It was delicious. =] |
 Latios151 2009-07-05 . chapter 23Ehm, pardon me for as I put aside for a moment all my intelligence, all my wit and all my pride as a college student:
/ SQUE! *_* /end
Ehm ehm... *coughs* so, what was I saying?
Oh, yes, Celeste's actions in this chapter are really the epitome of cuteness. Granted, she hasn't realised her feelings and doesn't want to, but doesn't that just make everything she does even -more- cute?
Wait, Alec's father is coming home? And Tracy says they need to make up a story? Does that mean Alec's father doesn't know about Tracy's past? Uh oh... |
 Fantasywriter150 2009-07-03 . chapter 27And I finally manage to submit a review... anyways, though you adressed it a while back, I do keep noticing how similar this is to Rosario + Vampire (especially since that is one of my favorite manga). However, there are plenty of differences... including how Alec is always seeming to attract female demons on his own (which I believe is part of the author's fault :p). However, the two things that really have my interest: what exactly is Alec's father, to be able to treat meeting demons as if it were nothing, and two... are you finally going to tell us what exactly Alec is/ what abilities he possesses?
Beyond that... it's a good story, and dammit, Alec and Celeste are both incredibly dense (though I suppose you can't entirely blame them)... good thing we have Sylvia around to hopefully play catalyst |
 Latios151 2009-07-02 . chapter 21Sorry if I didn't review sooner. I was busing with exams and Uni stuff...
So... Alec really is a weirdness magnet. Seriously, dragons? I have to agree with Alec here...
But who cares? Everything's better with dragons! XD
Some impressions:
Training uh? Might prove useful. In fact, I think it -did- prove useful just now.
Celeste going to a sleep over and riding a motorcycle? Now, where have I read something like that before? :P
So, you finally decided to introduce a male charact- no, wait, it's another girl. Ok, technically genderless, but -why- do I have the feeling Seito will spend more time in female form? XD
5th law of romantic anime: unless the protagonist does something about it, the harem just keep growing. |
 Miyasha 2009-07-01 . chapter 27That was great. I love it when stuff like this happens in anime by which I mean the good guy gets possessed and starts acting evil. It's soo cool. In this case the good guy was Alec. AND I liked how Kain had that talk with the relatives of the people that are involved with Alec. AND I like how you've managed to add so many interesting characters in this story. AND I know I really need to stop saying and but I had to say that I hope you do draw your characters and post them online at like deviant art or something. Whether or not your artistic skills are average, professional or whatever they may be. It would be awesome to see what the characters look like cuz I imagine that in my head the characters look nothing like how you envision them...phew that was a long post. Oh and one more thing, keep up the good work. It's often hard for me to find stories to my liking and this is to my liking...like Mcdonalds I'm lovin it. |
 King0Mik 2009-07-01 . chapter 27I like flashbacks; besides, flashbacks cause more character development.
Oh, and some other names:
(I couldn't find 'Suzu,' but I found 'Suzuki.')
Suzuki:Japanese:Bell Tree
Marlin:American:Combination Of Maria And Magdalene
Chloe:Greek:Verdant And Blooming
Samantha:American:Combined Name
Sam:English:Short Form Of Samuel Or Samantha
Cindy:Greek:Diminutive Form Of Cynthia Or Lucinda
Yuki:Japanese:Snow Or Lucky
Yami:Japanese:Darkness
Iris:Greek:Colorful or Rainbow
('Mori' means 'forest' in Japanese.)
Bea:American:Blessed
Sala:African:Gentle
Keith:Scottish:Place Name |
 King0Mik 2009-06-23 . chapter 25The relationship between Alec and Celeste reminds me of the relationship between Yuji and Shana in 'Shakugan no Shana.' I'll just randomly make comparisons.
Alec and Yuji both seem to be sort of loners until a certain point in their life, which just also happens to be when they begin a new school. They both also have some weird power that they themselves did not know about; Alec is able to resist many thing, while Yuji has the Reiji Maigo within him.
Celeste and Shana are similar, since they're both dense. Shana does not admit to her feelings until she is asks that she likes Yuji, while Celeste is in denial of her feelings. They both also happen to be stronger than their love interest (at least in the beginning of the story, anyway).
Oh! And just to be even MORE random, I'm typing down the names (that I can find out about and actually remember), their origin, and their meaning for no reason.
I'll put it in this format: Name:Origin of Name:Meaning
Alec:English:Defender of the People
Celeste:Latin:Heavenly
Tracy:English:From Tracy in France
Sylvia:Latin:Forest
Mia:Scandinavian:Sea of Bitterness
Mai:Japanese:Brightness
Sarah:Hebrew:Princess
Celina:Latin:Heaven
Shana:American:God is Gracious |
 Kuroa 2009-06-20 . chapter 25Refreshing. Aside from the other action-oriented stories i had been reading, your story definitely has it's own unique perks. |
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