a deceptively simple poem that is exhilarating to read with lines to die for. great work- "craven age" is a stellar concept. because, really. that's what it is. and such a well-worded ending.

like it, don't love it. I get the meaning but I tend not to like poems that make me get out my dictionary. it's still great though, just not for me. best of luck :)

Good work, well thought up words put in, keep writing.
~Lurid~