nice. very creative. :-)

It's a very good short...piece of...poetry-ness. It WAS random (YAY!!), but you should probably edit it so we know where the piece ends and the note begins.

LOL! I liked it, but I couldn't tell where the poem ended and the author's note started. Still, it was ... random (for lack of a better word) and AWESOME in its ... random-ness.
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

Cyber cookie? I'm there!
Random, but its good ;)... and discriptive, keep writing.
~Lurid~