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| ServalSpotz 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseI take it that this means that civilization is only fleeting, and someday we will revert back to what we used to be? Great poem, if a bit depressing. Or maybe that's just because it's winter right now. Anyway, thanks for being the first to review my poem. |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and capturing! I love the last line... it all fits so well together! Wonderful job! ♥ Dreaming Chica♥ |
| Basara 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusea thought of which man barely noticed... nice... |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. How the first line is formatted works well, with the images beyond. Very thought provoking. Well written haiku. MD:77. |
| I.O.K.O 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseFINALLY! Someone on ficpress that knows how to write a haiku. |