This is a really nice story!

Interesting story. Not a lot of back story on either Edward or Jamie. But, it was still a good first chapter.

I am really enjoying this story! I love their interactions. I felt so bad for Jamie when Edward was supposedly ignoring him, and so relieved when it turned out he wasn't. Really great story, I hope to see more soon!

Wow, I really like this so far. This is usually the point in which I'd suggest some kind of improvement, but I can't really see any. I can't wait to see the next chapters. Great job! :)