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tearing hands
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abuseReally nice ending. I think it starts out a little weak but gets stronger. Good job?
Also- I think you intended for the capitilized words to be the beginnings of new lines? Sometimes uploaded documents get a little messed up.
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