 Basara 2008-01-08 . chapter 1a beauty man can't seem to look beyond the image of lust and dependence...
nice... |
 Ygg 2008-01-08 . chapter 1Such powerful words (especially the last line - even more so because it's only one word)! The second line says so much. Wonderful! |
 Lurid Black 2008-01-07 . chapter 1Wow that is really good, gives me a clear picture.
Keep writing.
~Lurid~ |
 Doxology 2008-01-07 . chapter 1Wow. This is a really great haiku. Even ryhmes. :)
Peace & Love
~> h.p. warble |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-01-07 . chapter 1Very pretty!
I like the second line especially - 'Carries beauty within strength'. It basically sums up a desert rose very neatly. =)
Nice, clean, and simple. |