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Basara 2008-01-08 . chapter 1
a beauty man can't seem to look beyond the image of lust and dependence...

nice...
Ygg 2008-01-08 . chapter 1
Such powerful words (especially the last line - even more so because it's only one word)! The second line says so much. Wonderful!
Lurid Black 2008-01-07 . chapter 1
Wow that is really good, gives me a clear picture.
Keep writing.
~Lurid~
Doxology 2008-01-07 . chapter 1
Wow. This is a really great haiku. Even ryhmes. :)

Peace & Love

~> h.p. warble
Tranquil Thorns 2008-01-07 . chapter 1
Very pretty!

I like the second line especially - 'Carries beauty within strength'. It basically sums up a desert rose very neatly. =)

Nice, clean, and simple.
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