   Erlkoenigin 2008-09-04 . chapter 1noch besser als das Gedicht gefällt mir die summary |
 Basara 2008-01-08 . chapter 1true...
nice... |
 Dark Luver Of Blood and Misery 2008-01-08 . chapter 1Very catchy and true. Good work!
-Dark |
 Ygg 2008-01-08 . chapter 1Great diction and emotions in this one! Well done. |
 Lurid Black 2008-01-07 . chapter 1Sweet, you're awesome at haiku... carefully chosen words.
Love it! |
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