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| Charity F 2008-02-13 ch 1,  | abuseYour use of bold/italics/underlines is probably the most biazarre that i've ever read. =) But yes, you utilised them well to convey double meanings, which is excellent. Well done. Overall though, i didn't completely understand. |
| Definition 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusePowerful and intense - I love it. The formatting (italics/bold/etc) is well done! The last line is especially impactful - "the usual lies/listens to the lullaby). Fantastic. |
| Her Wishing Well 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the intensity of this, it makes it more real. Great job. |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the bolding italicizing... especially the ouch... the rest of the piece is beautiful as well... great job |
| Chidori Nadare 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseIt has a very intense feeling to it and the formatting adds something special to the piece. Keep writing -C.N |
| a silenced revolution 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI think the formatting adds to the piece, which is incredibly intense and haunting. Fav. line: "silver emptiness narrowing in" |
| Dandelion Cupcakes 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abusei like it xP it's different and keeps you reading to find out how it finishes... the bold/italic/underlines work well, i think... keep writing :] |