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Dillutional 2008-01-15 . chapter 1
Hey, sorry I havn't been around to review anything. I've kinda been really busy with finals nipping at my heals. Now that this is over, though, I hope I'll be around more to review more of your amazing poetry.

And speaking of amazing, I just kinda stumbled upon this when I got on for the first time today, and what a nice surprise it was. I really liked the way you used the words in parenthesis to kind of show what you where talking about and then pretty much explained them in your lines. (which were incorperated beautifully). After all not everyone knows what all that pretty little phychology stuff means. (I did ^_^) But not many do so I really liked that you made the words you where talking about easy to portray. So here I leave you with a nice long review for another stunning peice of poetry to try to apologize for my long silence. Thank you for all of your reviews. BY!

~Dillio~
Lurid Black 2008-01-07 . chapter 1
Sweet, good poem, good rhymes, I can't think of a way it can improve.
Good work, keep writting.
~Lurid~
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