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| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI think I hate both at the same time. Myself and some of the people around me. But it's ok girl you'll be fine. You'll find someone way better and who deserves you. I love how you expressed what your feeling. I can feel what your saying even though its over the computer and your(possibly) thousands of miles away. Great job! Kristie Marie |
| Assana 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI love this and maybe you should show this to him...it clear things up, if they haven't been. LOVE IT!! |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat job on expressing your emotions. I hope you're doing well. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| overprotected 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusewhat can I say? breakups suck. =/ |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the whole its not all anyone's fault its a combonation thing.. I also like the ending bc I know I write a lot things I could never say... great piece |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseUm... wow. That was the most productive break-up poem I've read in, I think - no, I'm positive - forever. You have such a smooth way of writing out your emotions while others just throw it down and call it a poem. Applause on that part. On the single part... well, there are two ways to look at that I guess. You can either see it as you are now free to roam the land of men ...or you can see it as the land of men hs rejected you. =] Your choice dear. Always here if you need something. -stix- |
| melbell 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abusei am still jumping for joy. THANK YOU! good job. im so proud of you. and you finally came to your senses! |
| Luv2Dance 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abusethats the most amazing thing i've ever read it really touched me! it's a true poem right? Aww. .So Cute ... So sad |
| maximusrexmundi 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuse:) sorry about the breakup. I dont know if you just want me to say what I have always said about your poems, so I will just let you think of the best thing you want to hear about it. |