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XxXKristie marieXxX
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuseI think I hate both at the same time. Myself and some of the people around me. But it's ok girl you'll be fine. You'll find someone way better and who deserves you. I love how you expressed what your feeling. I can feel what your saying even though its over the computer and your(possibly) thousands of miles away. Great job!

Kristie Marie
Assana
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseI love this and maybe you should show this to him...it clear things up, if they haven't been. LOVE IT!!
Twilight Starr
2008-01-09
ch 1,
abuseGreat job on expressing your emotions. I hope you're doing well. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~
overprotected
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abusewhat can I say? breakups suck. =/
simpleplan13
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseI like the whole its not all anyone's fault its a combonation thing.. I also like the ending bc I know I write a lot things I could never say... great piece
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abuseUm... wow. That was the most productive break-up poem I've read in, I think - no, I'm positive - forever. You have such a smooth way of writing out your emotions while others just throw it down and call it a poem. Applause on that part.

On the single part... well, there are two ways to look at that I guess. You can either see it as you are now free to roam the land of men ...or you can see it as the land of men hs rejected you. =] Your choice dear.

Always here if you need something.

-stix-
melbell
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abusei am still jumping for joy.
THANK YOU!
good job.
im so proud of you.
and you finally came to your senses!
Luv2Dance
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abusethats the most amazing thing i've ever read it really touched me! it's a true poem right? Aww. .So Cute ... So sad
maximusrexmundi
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abuse:) sorry about the breakup. I dont know if you just want me to say what I have always said about your poems, so I will just let you think of the best thing you want to hear about it.
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