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Reviews For: The Escape Route

luciiee.x
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseYet again, very well written.
I'm still not sure to what she has "done", but maybe that's just me.
Clarelouise
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseaww this is sad! i know, poetry isnt my strongest point either but this is definately readable hee, i love the way it ties in with the story! my favourite part is
"Sand-covered hands were washed with salty tears"
i love the clever way this could be interpreted as either the sea or her tears. well done!
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