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| luciiee.x 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseYet again, very well written. I'm still not sure to what she has "done", but maybe that's just me. |
| Clarelouise 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseaww this is sad! i know, poetry isnt my strongest point either but this is definately readable hee, i love the way it ties in with the story! my favourite part is "Sand-covered hands were washed with salty tears" i love the clever way this could be interpreted as either the sea or her tears. well done! |