Reviews for Move On, But Remember

Finwe
2008-01-10
ch 1,

abuseI like how you leave the reader wondering exactly what you're talking about. It makes it that much easier for people to turn and apply it to whatever might be happening in their lives, and therefore relate to what you're saying and empathize with you. Might I add, you've got oodles of talent, and I apologize for my last review saying the best that I'd written. LOL Meant to say "read". I gather you got that, but I wanted to apologize so you knew I realized, and now I can get on with my life. ;) Wonderful job. Ugh! I can't just pick out one part I like most, because I like it all! I didn't see anything needing fixing. I hope things get better.

lovemyemoboy
2008-01-09
ch 1,

abuseLove how it's filled with emotion, and I love that you chose the word snarl. It's a great word.

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