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| crazyrandomgirl888 2008-06-19 ch 1,  | abusereally good! this is true we do have a cycle and excatly as you said!! very good!! |
| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseDefinitely relateable, not for me but for one of my friends... I really like the way you tell the story. good job |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very relatable pattern of human behavior. I like how you concentrate on the "cycle", and its progression without veering off into unneeded details, because the pattern is the issue, not the individual situations that would make up the pattern. Very thought provoking and relatable. MD:77. |