When we ask "why me", we never actually considered the fact that everyone is feeling the same.. and so maybe everyone else is just equally unhappy.

'And so the broken house stays standing'-- Striking. This line, I think, captures the piece.
'Why do tears have to be our entrace and our exit into everything of note'-- Line seems forced. Maybe replace the word 'into' with something else? Because not many people exit into something.
-J.A.
Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).

I like the piece a lot... all the references to sadness are really nice and I love the idea of it being a house (or prison in the end).. that was really great.. also loved the line "a cage of brokenness" (although you need another n in there)

One line "Why do tears have to be our entrance and our exit into everything of note?" seemed a bit too long for the flow of the rest of the piece.. maybe you could split into two? just a thought

Another spelling thing.. "Unmistakeable pain."... unmistakable

Also after reading the whole piece one line at the beginning
seemed a bit off "and little hope for tomorrow?" it doesn't really seem like there's any hope at all

Anyhow it's a really great piece... wonderfully described...

PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon.. there's a link in my profile

Wow, this is completely beautiful. I love it. The imagery is amazing, so consistent with the overall tone of melancholy, every word is well chosen. The rhymes blend in nicely as well. This is one of your best recent ones in my opinion.

Powerful, seems almost tragic.
Keep writing.
~Lurid~