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| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-06-21 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting idea here |
| Thenardier 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseWhimsical. Something we all long for, captured succinctly here. |
| fatbird33 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseyes that would be nice. |
| sleeping Pisces 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseVery relatable. Though you can see this two ways; you want to erase the past year to rid yourself of mistakes, or you could do it to start again, because it was a good year. Common sense tells me it's the former you're alluding to, but I like to look for the silver lining. Either way, well written haiku. Peace, Daze |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI think we all can relate to this piece... well done... I like the title a lot |
| perpetual questions 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseIf only we could... Interesting idea with the reverse haiku. Nice. |
| Kusje 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one. It may be short and to the point, but it still holds a deep essence. Great job. |
| Ygg 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseThat sounds so dramatic.. I think as long as we are able to learn from whatever we do, we should not need a reset button. And imo we can learn from each and every situation, no matter how bad it was. That's one of the precious offers of spirituality. Well written Haiku! |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseDidn't haikus have to be 5 7 5 sylables? Well even if so it was still well writen, I know I want that to, keep writing. ~Lurid~ |
| Basara 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusein what humans linger to change but no matter what we do... we always end in such mistakes... like this: "if we had a mistake that made us traumatized and wished for a 'reset' it can be removed... yes, but did it ever occur to you that mistakes and events are always relevant that if that fear,guilt (any negative emotions) has been removed, like energy which cannot be erased just changed into something else... it will be put into you again... chances are there's no escape... only acceptance and improvement and growth..." nice... |