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Inkypink 2008-01-20 . chapter 1
Are you talking of a place within you where you hold onto things from childhood -- a refuge? A place you keep locked away because you can't let out certain things to be disfigured by a world that doesn't understand? I like this idea, but I'm not sure if I've interpreted this in the way you intended!

One mistake, I think you meant "lock" in the first line, not "lack"?

Who is the toy-catcher, btw? I like the last three lines -- they flow really well -- but I think I'm missing some symbolism here...you'll have to forgive me, I've been revising for exams all day! :D
purple x pen 2008-01-08 . chapter 1
i like this one, especially the fourth line, nice work =)
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