I really liked that. A lot. A lot a lot. I absolutely love it when people just go for difficult metaphors and confused writing to give a sertain edge- I even feel trippy after reading it. I thought the protagonist was female... It doesn't matter, though. what matters is that was an amazing story.

Keep it up! (impressed)

Janna X

wow! I'm blown away by the narration and the writing style in this. Just beautiful. I had a feeling the protagonist might be a girl, but I think it can work with either gender =)