Oh my god. That is so sad. Tears for her. And Jordan. Sob. But is he REALLY dead? Is he in trouble with Japanese gangsters? Oh I am so right. YES. Continue as quickly as possible!

Great chapter. Dramatic with a cliff hanger, but I still love it. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! The only thing I have to say is that in the beginning it seemed like you jumped in a little quick, but maybe that was the effect you were aiming for as the beginning was introducing the plane crash. Until the next update! -Katie

OMG! He died!??!! No, he couldn't have! Why did he give her the ring??! I can't wait til the next chapter and when you explain everything! Update soon!

nope, i like short chpters. hahah,
but is he really... gone?

Interesting start.

Wow, even though the first two chapters of your story are really short, I like it a lot! It's a different kind of voice, refreshingly so, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Until then,

Katie

Quick update. lol. Another great chapter.

'“Donna, baby, just wait for me in London okay? I’ll just break up with Evee then I’ll be there in two days. ‘Luv you!”'

Haha. That was good. XD

Haha. I'm liking this. It's very different from some of the other stories I've read on fictionpress. Totally fresh. =]