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| BlackestOpal 2008-05-09 ch 3,  | abuseWow. This is very moving. "the moon briefly hesitates will she come ashore?" I love those two lines, amazing. |
| Abulia Korbelitz 2008-04-14 ch 2, | abuseI like the second one. It's very expressive and interesting. |
| Basara 2008-02-19 ch 2, | abusea pride resistant to change, when the past virtues are the key of change... nice.. |
| Eirien 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseSo true, the real treasures are so often overlooked. Nice imagery to express this, I like the mixture of nature (oyster) and urbanity (bin), makes the poem in itself postmodern. |
| sleeping Pisces 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really striking haiku. The wasteful nature of the poem is really well done, the imagery was vivid and interesting. Peace, Daze |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-02-16 ch 2, | abuseExcellent! Love the line, "dappled with my pride". The title fits both haiku's (or haiku? lol) perfectly. --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseAs usual, awesome job! So much meaning is expressed. Keep it up! --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseFantastic haiku. It's simple yet extremely powerful and very well expressed. Also very true. Amazing! Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Basara 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusea language of alchemical philosphy which a normal person wouldn't notice abit... how humaity is becoming of "na(t)iv(e)ity" of the millenia... great! |
| laughter at the funeral 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusethe title is so subtle & love the last line awesome truly yours |
| Centaurrius 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseHeart - that's what you have. Good job. :) |