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| Daisy Silk 2008-04-17 ch 19,  | abuseGreat conclusion! |
| CodeRomance 2008-03-13 ch 2, | abuseok so why did they marry? and if it was because Henry loved her...or thought himself in love with her why would he not return with her? well I guess I was just wondering. Keeps me guessing I suppose! CodeRomance |
| CodeRomance 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abusewow, very eloquently written! I am very impressed. You made it interesting...and kind of mysterious. Keeps us readers engrossed in the story. CodeRomance |
| Phantasia.89 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, your very 1st chapter has inspired me to review... I usually review at the end of a story. Your writing style is unique & rather quaint, & I find that I rather like it. The sentences force me to read slowly so that I can savour the vivid & often dreamy descriptions. I particularly like the way you ended the chapter. Well, just thought I'd tell you what I thought ^^ Now I will read on... err... maybe after I do the study I'm supposed to ^^; |
| Kanna-sama 2008-02-19 ch 17, | abuseWhat I like best about your story is how detailed it is. Most authors put so much dialogue in and you can't understand what the heck is going on. Anyway, loved how this came up. Keep it up. |
| cinnamon-24 2008-02-02 ch 19, | abuseExcellent Job! Keep writing! I enjoy reading your work! |
| cinnamon-24 2008-02-02 ch 17, | abuseLove it...and Henry. |
| Gabby 2008-01-26 ch 19, anon. | abuseyay! wow...that was awesome. greatly written and impeccably plotted. I enjoyed reading that from beginning to end. |
| brunettebarbie14 2008-01-26 ch 19, | abuseaw it's over!! Great story congrats on finishing! Can't wait to read more stories! |
| fictionluvr 2008-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read through it too fast the first time and got confused as to who was who, but as I read updates I because interested again and went back and reread and now am enjoying very much. |
| Prieda Solo 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abusevery nice beginning. so sorry I can't continue with it but I am stupidly busy with work at the moment :( So much to do. anyway, lovely story. ciao! |
| Daisy Silk 2008-01-23 ch 13, | abusei really enjoyed your story, so much so that i staid up till 3:24 am reading it. please update it! |
| cinnamon-24 2008-01-21 ch 12, | abuseI like it! Update! |
| aims80 2008-01-21 ch 4, | abuseI am enjoying this story so far. You write well and with a lot of detail and descriptions. |
| Doubleday 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseYou definitely have talent but you need to learn more about punctuation and formatting, especially in regard to dialogue. It would make reading your work much easier and improve the flow. Try looking up 'Fiction Writing Tips' on a good search engine - meaning something other than Google. |