Reviews for a simple kind of love

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Zonne 2008-04-19 ch 5,	abuseaw, that's so sad. I wish she would've believed in herself more. I like the whole story and felt like it could easily happen (as you say it did) Now write the sequel.. HIS point of view. I didn't like the unhappy ending, but ... saw it coming in a way, yet, held out hope it would end with his asking her out. such a hopeless romantic. Good job The review Marathon Zonne Link in profile
Zonne 2008-04-19 ch 4,	abuseGreat! The emotions were great. The crumpled like a human paper bit ... fantastic I'm confused though He told her they should be just friends, then it seemed like she told him? which is it? I still don't know and I read it multiple times. Zonne
Zonne 2008-04-19 ch 3,	abuseThe emotion and introduction of her parents is good. Like that. Sad how she feels so all alone. The beginning was a lot about school work, though it supports her kind of falling apart, it seems like it's too much too fast.
Zonne 2008-04-19 ch 2,	abuseI like the building of this. The girls assumptions and her crazy twirling thoughts. I like that it doesn't share too much of his thoughts. I think quotes around the 'typing' or conversation, or some other way to break it from the rest of the sentences would make it easier to read. good job zonne
Zonne 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseI love the beginning - the part before the beginning. That is so true and sweet. I like the story so far. I'm glad you didn't leave it a one-shot. I feel some of it is awkward at times, the repeating words. Though, that could remain as is, because I haven't read enough to know for sure if that works or not. WHat I mean is this, they both seem awkward with themselves and each other, so the awkwardness feeds that. on to read chap 2 Zonne the review marathon link in my profile
Susan Aun 2008-03-30 ch 5, anon.	abuse**. This story is so about you. I bet it was about some guy you liked huh? Don't worry we are all here to support you. If you need some counselling, you are welcome to contact me on my email account. I am part of an organisation which helps teenagers understand the concept of life. It's a hard journey, one of imaginative proportions; but it is one we all must sojourn. God bless.
chowderhead 2008-03-29 ch 5, anon.	abuse._. damn that was intense. a bit too intense? hehehe. and HIMA, i think that someone would not appreciate that you put their name in your review. =P
Luminaerie 2008-03-21 ch 5,	abuseAw nice ending. :] I liked it even though I thought it was just a little bit too soon. That's my complaint. That's it. Lol nice story.
Luminaerie 2008-03-21 ch 4,	abuseI really liked this chapter. Even though at this point she liked him for no reason. >:O Gah I miss her. ;_;
The Thoughtful Reviewer 2008-03-19 ch 4,	abuseaww poor girl. thats actually happened to me before, being asked out but then saying no. i actually said no because i was scared, but same difference really. it does suck. i feel badly for her. haha and then for me the guy i liked started going out with my best friend. ah that was nice. you dont even know. just let your friend know that things will get better. she'll forget about him.. and one question - were you the one he used to like?
as 2008-03-19 ch 4, anon.	abuseJesus, talk about depressing. This is why I'd never tell my crush that I liked him. Good for your friend. Way to be brave. =) I hope everything works out for her.
KnittingKneedle 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseHi, I'm taking part in the review marathon (link is on my profile) I could sort of tell that this was a true story before reading the authors not because it has that sense of realism, without all the flamboyant romantic gestures that are great to read but never work out that way in real life, that's great. But I think some more description wouldn't go amiss, I'm not really sure where the characters are/what they look like and this chapter was a little too sparse for my liking.
Written 2008-02-22 ch 3,	abusevery dramatic and intense- I like it. I knew a girl in a VERY similar situation back in high school.
Luminaerie 2008-02-16 ch 3,	abuseI changed my penname XD if you haven't noticed lol. Really good. But i have another plot twist to give you if you would like to hear it. Yeah. :]
rebekah 2008-02-13 ch 3, anon.	abuseat first I thought that this story didn't make much sense but I read the whole thing and fell in love with it . its a really nice story and I can feel what the girl feels. keep writting^^

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