  keshia 2009-01-12 . chapter 1 i love this part it rocks |
| roxie 2009-01-09 . chapter 1 this is awsome |
  Estelin 2008-07-22 . chapter 1this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. |
| kurama_lover9118 2008-03-27 . chapter 1 ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! |
| kurama_lover9118 2008-03-26 . chapter 1 That was TOTALLY, ABSOLUTELY, COMPLETELY, REALLY AWESOME! I'm speechless! You did a great job! Expressing so well their feelings and matching them to their 'action'...quite impressive if I may say... This is by far the best M - rated story I have ever read. A masterpiece! |
| Lalaland 2008-02-12 . chapter 1 I'm from quizilla, and I'm a big fan of your writing, it is incedible. |
| Abby 2008-01-09 . chapter 1 Oh that was so good and very well written. I really hope you write another chapter like this one. Update SOON! |
 Jeex 2008-01-08 . chapter 1that was beautiful... just beautiful! |
 atreyu love 2008-01-08 . chapter 1m. that was interesting. |
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