Its short and bitter sweet. I liked it! r/r my story plz!

Sweet again, well writen, love it =D
Btw sorry not goth =[ I guess I encourage the myth too much xD
Keep at it!

This was good. I agree too, you showed emotion very well in this poem. Keep it Up!

That was really good. You have no problem with showing emotion. If you want you could experiment with rhyme schemes or different types of poems. I like it. Keep up the good work.

Good poem. Of course, the ending is kind of ironic. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~