Holey crap! So Therin was dead all a long, or did they just switch places? Any way, it rocked!!

wow.
absolutely amazing !

wow... that's cool... you should extend this into a novel or something... I could see it work!

The ending is positively chilling. This is a surreal, believable discourse. I have goosebumps! Well written, horrific tale. Nicely done.

Awesome story! Your style of writing is great, it's so fluent, it gets you hooked and keeps you hooked!

Oh, may the divine gods bless my soul with strength. That was THE SCARIEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. But, I am a bit frail-hearted. Anyway, I can see why you put it under "Horror". Your writing has a delicate, glassy grace that can be both beautiful and heart-wrenching at the same time. You have set a standard that should be followed by everyone. Well, not exactly EVERYONE, for that would only result in a total lack of variety, but you get my point. I hope.
Anyway, I can only hope that I can hold my own against a truly magnificent creation like that which you have put to words.