The angsts! IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL!

Actually, I just like the prose. I also like Eric and Aiden's relationship. I kept thinking you were going to say something like 'AHA! SECRETLY ADOPTED!' and have there be some [notreally]cousincest or something. For t3h angsties.

Seb. Hm. He makes me think about my debate-team partner (who is a snotty rich kid named Connor).

And now for the constructive criticism (there isn't much. I don't review on stuff I don't like):

Parts of it seem to vague...Eric's loss, Seb's cemetery visitations, Travis's little cwush. I know they're yet to be revealed, but it seems like that should happen soonish. If it can't for plot reasons, that's cool too. Like I said, I love the story. It's great.

Update soon, yes? It would please me.

Seems that the strange guy really deserve his name. Maybe it's just me but I don't find this story too angsty. Maybe it's because of all the nice people around Aidan. Anyway I like it better this way. Reading stupid post-it notes too I find angst (but mostly Seth) to be tiring.

Ok, do as if a hadn't said the bit about no one following him would be strange. And your characters are cute.

watch your verbes, some were put to strange tenses. Also it really seems crazy for someone to bolt like this from the house but it's even crazier thant nobody went after him no?

Hello,
Stubled upon you story and so far the fact that the cousin is nice makes it rather balanced. As you said not everybody can be mean for someone who just lost his only close family so like this it gets more normal and bearable.

I absolutely love this story. It's just...wow. All your characters are so lovable, even Sebastian who barely talks and likes to stare. I think I saw a few minor spelling mistakes, but can't recall them at the moment. Besides that, awesome story; touching, sad, cute. Good work. I look forward to your next chapter!

Dude... I didn't even know you wrote the next chapter! Wee. It rocked.. Don't worry about me being an idiot. You're the writer, you can do what you please. xD

Brampton, huh? I know it's weird, but I've actually never been there. Hamilton, yeah.. Scarborough too but not Brampton. I know ppl who live there though they still come here for school.. for some reason.
Oh yeah and I'm really happy to know that you thought my review was fun... and that I'm not a stalker. Heheh.

oh yeah and I KNOW MAD WORLD! I have it on my iPod! It's from Donnie Darko.. And yes it is VERY angsty. I don't listen to it anymore because I get sad just listening lol. So yeah, no more.


And and where's Sebastian?! Skipping? Bad bad boy. xD

Can't wait for the next chapter. Write soon! =3

It's nice that Aiden has Eric and his friends to watch out for him. Especially since his Aunt May is such a nasty thing!

lol i know...i gag even thinking about kissing one of my cousins...even the ones not "blood related" :p

I get what you're saying about angst and it's a little emo, but not too bad. :) got introduced to the new school and everything. :) it's nice!

This is a very cool story you've got here.

still not very angsty, but that's because I'vde never lost anyone close to me so I guess I don't understand. The crying all the time seems weird, but I think it's 'cause I'm not a big crier. good job though.

lol aw but eric and aidan are so cute...you could have aidan be adopted or somethign!:p lol jk

Aw.. Poor Aiden! *huggles him*

I really like the story so far! XD You've made me very curious about Sebastian. :) Can't wait for more!

I'm still all for cemetery sex.
...involving Seb and Aiden. X3
No cousincest?! You meanie.
All angst and no sex :(