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| selfish4more 2008-05-26 ch 1,  | abusepromise was great but how come you only have one chapter to the sequil i mean if you upload any chapters it should at least be more than one anyways i hope that they meet up with kadri, i realy hate autumn she realy ** me off she needs to die and on top of that she is going to be surprised when kadri confronts her she is going to get an ** kicking o boy i can not wait for the rest of the chapter i realy want to find out who saved kadri also i almost forgot to say that i loved the promise it made me promise myself to read the sequil...need more more i tell you(^_^). |
| leckie 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusei love this story plz put up more chapters |
| ilovevampires2 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseWait, I'm a little confused...haven't read Promise in a while and I'm a little lost. Could you help me? I liked it though, thought it was well written. Keep it up! |
| HeatherLee 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusegood beginning. i like how we are seeing the story fron Geraldine's pov because we didnt know much about her in the last book. good start and i cant wait to read more! |
| Taylary Daisuke 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseHallelujah! You don't know how long I've been waiting for you to upload this fic. Seriously, one day I finish reading "The Promise" and the other day I can't find the sequel anywhere. Anyways, on with the chapter. Haha, this is from... ack! I forgot her name! I forgot the main character's name. C'mon, think think think. Lets see, Quinn, Autumn, Geraldine (my favorite girl in the series even though she actually hasn't done anything)... ack, I can't remember her name. Maybe if I read further ahead. Wait! This isn't what's-her-name's POV? This is Geraldine's? (wait here for a second while I add this story to my favorites) Kadri! Her name is Kadri! (I'll like to say I remembered it but, I just read it.) Ha, I kinda always knew Avery and Camrym were part of the good guys. It's just that Joel had something against them. Girl, "The Promise" is fine as it is, don't worry about it. But now, in the next chapter, describe Geraldine's physical features. I want to know how she grew. (Basically if she is short or tall and things like that.) Nice starter chapter btw. |
| Captain Dark 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseGood job. It gets the story started. I can't wait to read more. |
| melancholytoabeat 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI thoroughly enjoyed The Promise, and this chapter is a very good start on the sequel, hope to read more of this story |