 Taylary Daisuke 2008-01-13 . chapter 1Hallelujah! You don't know how long I've been waiting for you to upload this fic. Seriously, one day I finish reading "The Promise" and the other day I can't find the sequel anywhere.
Anyways, on with the chapter.
Haha, this is from... ack! I forgot her name! I forgot the main character's name. C'mon, think think think. Lets see, Quinn, Autumn, Geraldine (my favorite girl in the series even though she actually hasn't done anything)... ack, I can't remember her name. Maybe if I read further ahead.
Wait! This isn't what's-her-name's POV? This is Geraldine's?
(wait here for a second while I add this story to my favorites)
Kadri! Her name is Kadri! (I'll like to say I remembered it but, I just read it.)
Ha, I kinda always knew Avery and Camrym were part of the good guys. It's just that Joel had something against them.
Girl, "The Promise" is fine as it is, don't worry about it.
But now, in the next chapter, describe Geraldine's physical features. I want to know how she grew. (Basically if she is short or tall and things like that.)
Nice starter chapter btw. |