heh, oh, playing outside in the winter
my snowbeast was always sasquatch
i was convinced he'd just wander into rural CT
and just abduct me from the back yard of my grandparents' house

and you, of course
are eloquent
and paint incredible scenes
like always

So adorable! I remember my older brother used to tell me mean stuff like that when I was little. The imagery of Jamie as a "frightened orange marshmallow" was absolutely priceless. This story is timeless (except for the electric oven)! I really enjoyed reading it. It's been a while since you've submitted anything...

This was nice. You did a good job in capturing the sibling rivalries and also the naivete of childhood. Oh, to be a child again...*sigh* Good job!

this was pretty good ^_^