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katie 2008-06-25 . chapter 7
wow new chapter as good as ever and i hope they all end up as happy couples i know there's already one! good luck writing the next one!
Imagine Nation 2008-01-14 . chapter 3
Aw, I like this.
It's cute!

=]
ColdCoffeeEyes25 2008-01-14 . chapter 3
Oh, I like this. Your protagonist is young, but she's not silly; she thinks things through and she's thoughtful of her friends. The dialogue is great -- it reads like real people talking to each other, and moreover they're people I like. I particularly like how Mizuki and Sayoran are very frank with one another in their private conversations.
XVampiricAngelX 2008-01-12 . chapter 2
Another great chapter that was well written. I really got what the characters were feeling. Your characters are coming along beautifully. Keep up the good work :D
VA
XVampiricAngelX 2008-01-09 . chapter 1
That was really well written and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work :)
ForeignBelle 2008-01-09 . chapter 1
Though I don't really read f/f...or m/m very much I really have to say that this story is really good sp far!..Oh the woes of having New Kid Syndrome
Anja Artillery 2008-01-09 . chapter 1
I'm becoming a fan of your work. I've never really read a Japan based fic before, but it was quite an interesting change. I like their interactions, and greetings towards each other. I don't read much f/f, but I enjoyed this. I hope Mizuki reaches out to Mokono soon, it's horrible being a new student and not knowing anyone. Update quickly! :)
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