In the line "What dose it matter what people act like or say" the second word should be "does"
and instead of "anarchy's" it should be "anarchists".
Thats just a couple minor things. I especially like the ending. Nice job.

so true. oi' wut has the world come to?

:D This rocked.

Cool I like it, good point!

So true, I liked that, though you didn't put any question marks where there were questions. Keep writing!