there is no way anyone can survive on just the things she eats..

I LOVE IT!

the first thing i did was freak out cause i thought you were plagerizing.
then i realized you were ladiix3?

yo...its me...lol...no its wildcrazylover from quizilla...just droping by..to say i still love your story and all...and keep it up and ill still read your story...

I love this story...so much!! I even love it in 2nd person! Good luck with the revamp!

by the way; i liked the whole "you" thing
authors put that all the time; to make the reader feel like they are the actual character.

you're great (:

I don't know if you're still taking these or if someone already said it but,
Accidental Love

I'm so glad you're changing the tense. I'm really sorry if that review I left was mean. I had no intention, what-so-ever for it to be that way. I just feel like your story has so much potential. I'm goind to read it for sure when you do change things around. Good luck with your title!

I really do like your story so far. It's a good plot and I really want to read more, but the whole "you" thing is too much. I have read some of the reviews that people have left you, and I don't want to be slandered for my review, just like I know no one else would want to, but I do think it would have been better if you would have switched "you" to "I" or just something else in general. I understand that this story is probably something very important to you and I understand and respect that. I really do like the plot, but I can't continue to read because of the fact that you used the word "you" so much. Sorry if this was mean, and sorry to the people who will read this review in the future, but please don't judge. I'm trying to be encouraging, but also eltting you know what could make future stories better.

I personally like the original title but some ideas are:
A hot shot leader...and me = marriage? Heck no
Dad's betrayal, new life, arranged marriage?
Fairy Tale Ending? Pfft, he doesn't even know anime
Past the Point of No Return: An arranged Marriage

I'll think of more later

You're back! Im so happy! :D I have been waiting for an update for this story for so long! As for the title, I really like it! Even if you just cut out the 'an arranged marriage' part, it would be good.

hey i tink the story line is quite good, but maybe you should consider writing it from a first person's point of view? it does sound unnatural when the narrator refers to herself as you

You should keep it the same!
:)

The non-existent Arrangement

I'd Spend the Night With You

So Unlike Me

Time to Love You

All About It

When It Comes to You

or you can just take out "ARRANGED MARRIAGE" and keep "Good Thing You're Beautiful"

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i've been reading your story ever since you published chapter two on quizilla. You came far :D i'm happy for you

hm im really bad at making up titles but ill try to think about it, but i just want to say i think it should definately change to make your book sound more official and less Quizilla-ry (no offense because i love the books!)