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| upinstars 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuselol very cute. I love poems that tell a story but have never been able to write them myself. Great job. |
| yesterdaydream 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI really liked that, it made me smile :) |
| lucidspiritdreamer7 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAWW I love it you are adorable i love your poems and stories |
| shola 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI like this. The rhyme is really playful and suits the overall mood. Not sure if the angsy bits fit (a bit more sarcasm might fit the romcom overtones a bit better) But very effective nonetheless |