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| Yours Truly-Derranged Pixie... 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseLooking foward for your update |
| Yours Truly-Derranged Pixie... 2008-06-14 ch 5, | abuseHey , I just wabted to say that I just beagn reading your story and im HOOKED! I know the troubles of updating on time .. . .Ive had similar prblms before .. .. so update wenever but know that your story has got this one fan !! |
| Searbear 2008-06-14 ch 5, | abuselol no worries, it's great your coming back I can't wait to see what happens :D |
| Nancy 2008-06-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseI really don't understand why this story has such little reviews. I absolutely love it and can't wait until you update. SOON I hope! |
| bobplight 2008-04-27 ch 4, anon. | abuse!_! Conflict! *sigh* I miss Broden, give me Broden. I'm dieing to see interaction between Broden and Attie. What will happen? Will they be lovey-dovey siblings? Will he go evil on her? Will she run away driven by Broden's hateful words? Gr! SO many Questions!Give me a chapter soon or else I'll sick my rubber duckies on you! >^-^^-^ |
| A Different Kind of Yellow 2008-04-27 ch 4, | abuseAh she can't let george take over her life, he seems a bit controlling! I know the whole separation of academics and musicians in the school is a bit of a wide gap, but why does it have to be like that outside it? I'm glad Attie's on her way to changing it. Can;t wait for the next chapter! x |
| Dashara 2008-04-11 ch 4, | abuseDude, amazing chapter... thumbs up. Like I said before, I really like how you describe Attie's passion for music as a weakness thats almost her downfall. Wonderful writing. When Is Broden going to be part of the family again? |
| not-what-you-think 2008-04-10 ch 4, | abuseOh, that was a wonderful chapter!! It aches in me that Attie won't play... And I'm really dying to know the reason to that! But then again, I can understand you hiding something from your main character. I'm not better at that... Anyway, it's great! And I really want Broden to speak to her. Hagan is a great brother to her, but I guess he can't replace what Broden had with Attie... |
| Sar 2008-04-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love the story thus far. Very well written and the characters are compelling. |
| Aliceeeee 2008-04-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG! I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY. Its so delightfully complex in Attie's psyche, I'm itching to see whats going to happen next. Please dont ever break my little heart and discontinue this story like so many other sadistic authors out there. You have a good thing going on here! -ALICE |
| WriterGurl123 2008-04-09 ch 4, | abuseIt's a bit confusing about why everyone is worried about her. She loves music, but why isn't she playing? Why does she have breakdowns randomly? I need more clarification on that, but otherwise, the story is fantastic. Post More Soon! |
| theslykit 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abusewow...definitely something i am not used to reading but intriguing nonetheless. attie is such a refreshing character with her quiet and mysterious ways and piteous due to her life ruled by the tyrannical david. i do have a question thogh..why do they call their mom mena and not mom? maybe i skipped over the part but... |
| Pink and Black Sharpies 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abuseAmazing! Beautiful! I honestly love this story, it is a piece of art, and is magnificent. I would love to see her play more music, and sort of have someone recognize her as a musician. Truly I think it would add a whole new leg to the story. Ciao and update as soon as possible or I will die from sadness. |
| claireponcherrii 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abuseoh i play the violin! |
| claireponcherrii 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abusedoes attie play an instrument too? |