I am so glad this story is being updated! I love this story so much and I can't wait for more chapters. Please update ASAP!

I love this story. They way you write is astounding. It really makes me identify with Attie. I hope you update soon, because this is my favorite story on fictionpress now. It was a privlidge to read.

Hi

Thanks for not abandonning the story! I'm looking forward for the new chapters

Hey !
I was so happy to see that you updated your story today as well. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And I so love Agent - whose name always makes me think about The Matrix movie - I hope they'll become good friends.
What about Gabriel ? Are we going to see him in chapter 5 ? And will him and Attie finally get to talk together ? And I also hope Broden will be more present...
I know, I'm asking too much, sorry XD
-Moyashi

So I don't get it, what instruments does she and hagan play? Ik she plays chello sorta, but if a band wants her then she obviously has to play the piano or guitar or something else. Also, what is up with broden and hagan having different last names if they are twins. The story is vague on a lot of things and it needs to be clarified as these things are a major part of the story. I thought a guy was going to come into this?

Nice second chapter. I'll be reading the third one later. I just can't wait to see Attie and Gabriel's first encounter.

I got to read chapter 1 and so far it's quite good. I'm pretty eager to find out what will bring Attie and her guitar boy together and how will the lost relationship between Attie and Broden will evolve.
I'll be reading the chapter 2 tomorrow, since it's quite late here XD

Ah...well, I was looking for another update..
but if this will make the story better, I look forward to it!
:D

its a really good story. i'm glad you've decided to keep it up instead of completley abandoning it. as far as the rewrite goes, i think you have a big decision to make. it seems to me like you have two major conflicts going on at once without any way to tie them together. in your summary, you make it sound like the whole focus of the story is the problem between attie and gabe, but in the story itself the problem centers around attie's personal problems and the divide between the academic and musical diciplines at school. i think you need to either downplay or get rid of one of these conflicts. or you could have attie talk to gabe earlier on and tie all these problems together. good luck with the revision!

Great story. It's developing really well. I like Attie, though I'm not really connecting with Gabriel yet... I suppose we'll catch up to him soonish enough. I love Agent, funny name, crazy girl, she's adorable.
Can't wait for the next installment, tc, cyas

i just read the new summary and i just wanted to add to my chapter 7 review: although i think they would make the cutest couple ever and i SO badly want more interaction between Attie and Gabe... i really really hope they dont fall in love too quick! i mean i understand the "pull" Attie has on Gabe and i think that rocks, but i honestly think it would not be cool if they became a couple or something too fast. i just wanted to let you know... because i became a bit scared... and im sorry for rambling twice in one update -.-' it wont happen again. it's just that i've read my fair share of fics and a lot of really good stories have been ruined because of the main couple falling too fast. what you have is an amazing story, and i'd hate to see it ruined!

i promise that is the last of my rambles. and i am terribly sorry... lol. but the good news is (for me anyway) that Attie "dislikes" Gabe! YAY! omg! you do not know how happy that made me while reading chapter 7. im a cliched person. in short, i heart love hate relationships! and i heart your story! update soon! =D

I don't know if this is right, but maybe Gabriel noticed Attie and asked Agent and Seiran to befriend her. I think that she doesn't give Gabe enough credit than he deserves, and although he seems like an ass, this is only Attie's perspective. I'm quite interested in finding out about Gabe.

Love it!

I truly enjoy this story so far, alot of gaps that I'm sure you are going to answer in future chapters that keep me guessing. I like the characters and think your writing is very good.

I don't know what compelled me to read more stories today, but I'm glad I did. :). I like the way your story is slow-paced; makes everything more relaxed until you spring the readers with drama. Anyways, I'll have to make this short. I'm interested in the story so far, and I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. ;D, have a wonderful day!

I love this. I really do. it's the first story that I've read on this site that has a major music spin to it. I'm really curious about Attie's new friends, and I'd really like for her to have more direct interaction with Gabriel--I can't wait for that. So please update soon! I can't wait to read more about these developing relationships and learn more about Attie's past.