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| Le Pecore Nere 2008-01-10 ch 1,  | abusewow, that was very emotional. Great start, gets you hooked in. The last paragraph was very descriptive :) Good job so far, UPDATE SOON!! |
| reno-xxxXXXxxx 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abusenice start. I particularly like the last paragraph, it had a lot of nice description in it. Well done :D |