This is a good piece - relatable and understandable. i like the use of questions. good work :)

Sweet, strung together so nicely, that it's like it would sound better when it's not rhymed (If that makes any sense) Awesome poem, well written and based off a short saying. Keep 'em awesome!

Well, the poem itself is cliche, but many people can relate so I guess that's good. Write on.

~Anna~