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| Nirvanic Panic 2008-01-09 ch 1,  | abusethis was awesome! great concept, but you might wanna move the lines a bit cuz it was a little confusing to read, other than that it was great |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThe lines were too chopped up and made the poem rather dragging, but I still liked it nonetheless. Write on. ~Anna~ |