Props to you!
I remember reading this quiet a while ago, and I really wanted to read more of it, but there wasn't much. So again I say props!
Can't wait to read more!
~SohoNights

Please, please, please write more.

It can't end there, not just yet!

Please. For me?

PLEASE?

Write more. Please. Soon. Please.

Lurves,

~ DC

*squeals*

*dies*

*comes back as to review*

Omigod. Best. Chapter. Ever.

So far. Betcha there's more!

Eek. Cutter scares me. Is he supposed to?

He hurt Ana. Die fiend!

I hope Toya kicks your sorry dog butt!

Great job, keep it up!

~ Ember

Uh-oh.

That's not good.

Ooh, Austrailia.

I want to go now.

So bad.

Anywhoo, loved this chappie.

You're probably sick of hearing from me, but I think it's polite to review every chapter if you can, so there!

Hm. Milo? Owen?

Bah.

I'm assuming you'll tell me later.

Do you speak Spanish regularly?

I do sometimes in my house with my mom and dad and I'm in my second year at school.

La clase de espanol es muy divertida!

Yeah. That was lame, but oh well.

Keep it up!

Toodles,

~ DC

*throwing fake punches*

Take that!

And that!

And a little bit of that, too!

Hee-hee-hee.

I absolutely adore OFC's who can throw a good punch or two.

Especially if they're hitting their good-for-nothing boyfriend.

No offense, Nate. I had a feeling he would be trouble though.

Uh-oh . . . forshadowing! I love it when Toya says, "Someone else will come along . . . "

That's so adorable!

*crinkles nose, making a strange face*

Why, 'why' does Toya remind a little bit of Steven Strait? Am I THAT obsessed?

Yeesh.

Oh, well. It's only a little bit though.

Keep it up!

~ DC

If I may ask, what the heck is a Jiffy Pop and where can I get one?

Omigod.

I thought the house was on fire!

And who was that guy?

Guess I hafta wait, huh?

Grr.

Keep up the good work.

Lurve, lurve, lurvey, lurve,

~ DC

Woof!

Like a faithful dog (no pun intended . . . well, maybe! *grins*), I have sent you a review!

Love this chapter. There's only a few mistakes I noticed in it, too. Just a few spacing errors between your dialouge; this isn't really a mistake, just a suggestion: if you put some more Spanish in your story, try italicizing it. It make it easier to read and it looks cooler too! Ha, ha, ha!

Keep up the great work!

Well, off to see the wizard! Toodle-loo!

~ DC

*"Pink Panther" theme music*

Guess who!

I'll betcha you can't!

It's me! Your fantabulously awesome, friendly neighborhood, spaztastic . . . Ember!

Yes, 'tis I. The wonderful person that faithfully reviews your stories. Wooh-hoo for me. Anyway, I saw your Fiction Press link in your profile and I figured I should check it out. I was really happy and surprised when I found this little jem of a story. God, I love it! Everything is so amazing about it!

Naturally, of course.

I'm already on chapter three, but I figured I should come back and review for chapter one. I was a bit peeved when I saw that no one else had reviewed this. It's so great! I love Ana and Toya and every character in this story so far. Keep up the good work!

*squeals*

Well, I'm done being hyper now. Hope you like my review! And feel free to check out some of my Fiction Press stuff. If you want I could send you a review for every chapter. I think I will.

Catch you later!

Buncha love!

~ Ember (aka Deh Cactus)