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| stardustfaery 2008-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseyay, your mind does make it real but imagination is incredibly important too! Keep writing! |
| 123454321 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseA little on the bland side for a haiku. I think you could exchange some words for those that really pop. The last line really is the line that was the worst. The first line I liked, but from what I've read, you can do much better. -J.A. Courtesy of the review marathon (link in profile). |
| VegasGoddess 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is so great! I loved it! It completely captured the way I feel when reading a good book... It was just very well done. ♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥ |
| painted.music 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa So true and so beautiful as well. You captured the feeling perfectly. Plus, the italics helped it a lot, give it a feeling of etheral... something or other, LoL. Have a great weekend! Zaijen -Shan- |
| girl-behind-the-book 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseoh wow...I'm in love with this haiku. this is seriously my favorite that I've ever read! GOOD JOB!! I love the first line...a world in paper. Cause that's what a book is. It's a world in paper. The second line is great...written in ink for your eyes. It's like the world in ink, for your eyes only ;) the last line is my favorite. your mind makes it real. We're the ones who bring the story to life. we all can take the same book and get something different out of it. I LOVE IT!! oh heck, I love all three lines haha. keep writing hun. |
| Basara 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abusea true aspect of how to obtain something... nice... |
| Dormio 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseVery true. And very nice :] |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI really love the middle line |
| Ygg 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuse"Man's imagination is more important than knowledge" Einstein said.. and he was right. You've worded is perfectly. Great work! |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAgain, really well writen, as if you're talking it in everyday life (well almost) not writing it down in haiku. Great poem, keep at it! |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseRemember a haiku is 5-7-5. The last line isn't five syllables - it's 7. :p But otherwise great job. Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |