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| breezies 2008-07-30 ch 18,  | abuseBefore I started reading this story yesterday, I got it confused with another one that only has four chapters and is completed. By the time I got to chapter three I was screaming "NO!" (in my head). I didn't want it to be done =D That's why i'm happy to see that it isn't. I'm glad that I decided to read this story. I mean really, I stopped watching family guy just to write and submit this review. So, like you should already know, I LOVE THIS STORY. I guess i'll go into what I like about the chapter and all that normal review stuff when the next chapter is up. I hope that's soon though, because the last time this was updated was a couple months ago. Guess i'll go check out your other stories for now! =D |
| iFruit 2008-07-27 ch 18, | abuseLong time reader, first time reviewer. First of all, I like the fact that this plays on the jock-and-freak cliche, but changes it up. I always see the freak clinging onto the jock, but finally we get something different. It's the whole reason I adore this story. You never fail to lose my interest, especially the drama with Isaiah. Exactly how messed up is he? Or is he just obsessed with Ian? I sorta think that Ian is a ** sometimes, like the way he tries to get Toby to adapt to his life, but he hates adapting to Toby's life. I'd like to see where that goes. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| TheCresentMoonWriter 2008-07-23 ch 18, | abuseYou know, I kinda feel bad for Toby. Ian doesn't appreciate him enough. Nope. I love Ian but... I feel bad for Toby. I was going to ask about the gun but you answered my question in the last chapter. Now you guys made me want to read a fic about a school shooting. I'm gonna go look for one. Great chapter! Great story!! Can't wait for more! |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-22 ch 18, | abuseI wonder if Izzy likes Ian...or does he like Maggie? I hop you update soon. If you do--I'll review XDD :) |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-22 ch 17, | abuseXDD The stick figures cracked me up. I nearly died of laughter. |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-22 ch 16, | abuseI hope when the story is done, you write a sequel of them in College. That would rock. |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-22 ch 15, | abuseAww...how sweet. What a cute way to spend christmas--Together! :P |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-22 ch 14, | abuseOh my god...Izzy's gone mad! XDD The last lines were hilarious, and Ian and Toby's ways of showing public affection. |
| LizzleShizzle 2008-07-22 ch 18, | abuseHI :D i LOVE this story and cant wait for a new chapter ^^ you are gonna write one right? well i hope so |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-21 ch 13, | abuseAw...poor Toby...he wants to be snuggled. XDD I like the fact that they're looking to get into the same college, it's sweet. |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-21 ch 12, | abuseOh my god, they got it on! O.o XDD But it was kinda cute, Ian being jealous. |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-21 ch 11, | abuseDrunk Ian? I can't wait to see how that goes. I think Toby should just come out and kiss Ian in public, then it would all come out. XDD |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abuseToby is going to get MAD when he finds out Ian is going with Izzy. Is Izzy gay? |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-21 ch 9, | abuseIt's kind of surprising that Toby is the one who wants to show public affection when he's the one who will be ridiculed...everybody already thinks Ian's gay...I think. But that's what makes this story so original :) |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-21 ch 8, | abuseAww how cute! A --kind-of-- date chapter. That last part when Ian forgave Toby was really sweet. |