XD That was effing hilarious. AWESOME!

Kayne definitely is a devious (but adorable) bastard. Lucky Oliver :P

Gah, I love your writing. That's all I can say.

-Ryette

Hahahaha, I loved this. It was hilarious and adorable and the characters and situation were both amazing. Overall, it was pretty much just... Awesomeness. :) Great job!

I wish my math classes were this hilarious.

You have quite a nice style. Your characters are adorable and your little story is so sweet. Bravo.

i like it

i think you should've made the relationship a little bit more, like a bit more kissing,cuz that's always good to read.

nice story, very cute.

That made me laugh! CUTE! :)