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| mistress tee 2008-01-19 ch 4,  | abuseno! you left it at a cliffhanger! why? |
| xxily4everxx 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseum ok...nice story |
| animefreakgirl 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseWow...I'd love to see what Kayla will do to Maria now. Story isn't bad, I'm looking forward to your next chapter. I do wonder what Michael said to her in the car though. Anyways keep writing more and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :) |
| Serena of Fire 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseHey love your story so far! Update soon! |
| precious-memories 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abusehaha, nice chapter and story so far! update soon! |
| duckliy543 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abusehahha they are so cute kayla is a serisoul mean person she reminds me of this person i know in real life named kayla who's just as mean as that! |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-01-14 ch 3, | abuseHi!There isn't really a point of my reviewing but..what the hell! I'm still here anyway! :) :b |
| duckliy543 2008-01-14 ch 3, | abusehah a liked it kayla seems like a such a bezzy. goodness. |
| ujungpelangi 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI like your story. Well, I guess you like Meg Cabot just like me. Some of character seems a bit like 'All American Girl'. Chapter 1 is so Meg Cabot . Don't be offended, I hope you take it as complimentary. I WISH I can write a story like Meg. A girl with a snake? Instead of weird, this girl is brave enough. You must show her bravery more, because a girl with a snake is really something. Nice reading. |
| duckliy543 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abuseomy i really love this story and i realized kind of why. maria is just like me. to curious and speaks before her mind actully processes whats right to say. i alaway slove the end of your chapters hilarous. amazing job! |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abuseHi! Cute ending! Lol... You're looking for a beta? I'm volunteering. :) I have to say,I've never done this before so i'm trying this out. I think I'll do a good job at this.Just email me if you want a beta. Anyways,can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter! Update soon! |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseHi! Great first chapter! Love to read furthur! Update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter. Nice doing business with you too. :b |
| mistress tee 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseman there's only one chapter?? but my this is so good! you must get more up soon! |
| duckliy543 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseoo liking it already i love the endyou have got to be kidding me hahha great job cant wait for the second chapter. |
| I'm the Evil Twin 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI like it a lot!! It is very well written and interesting. |