Reviews for My First Haikus - FictionPress.com

xDancingintheRainx 2008-01-10 ch 1,	I definitely like the first one best. Although with my pen name, that isn't surprising. ^^ The imagery of the first one is especially beautiful. I really like the idea of singing in sunsets. I like the second haiku too, just not quite as much as the first. Very nicely written. Well done.
half-sketched.staccatos 2008-01-09 ch 1,	konban wa I like the first one better, I think. I like the "To dance in the rain is like singing in sunsets" - though I don't so much like the rhyming. I guess to each his own, but I'm not really into hiakus rhyming. I feel like it detracts from them somehow. shrug So I didn't like that they rhymed, but the imagery for both was beautiful. Zaijen -Shan-
The Balance in Eternity 2008-01-09 ch 1,	They're good, but if my knowledge on Haiku's serves me properly, the second one has 1 to many syllables in the second and third line. Technically, not good. But if you want to go outside of the technicality, then they are really good.
Lurid Black 2008-01-09 ch 1,	First one is sweet but the second one goes 5 8 6 so you might wanna shorten it down a little ;) Keep writing! ~Lurid~